The dreamscape terminal project.
Great Image and I like the effect on it. As a typographer though I really think you need a beefy typeface for the title. I always think what the title would look like by itself on a t-shirt. That may be a good competition for your students, think of a logo and get a t-shirt, or a wonka bar or something.
Something bothers me about how close the black is to her on the left side, I get the impression you're trying to 'hide' something that's not supposed to be in the picture. Like when people crop their friends out of an image for their MySpace picture :PIt just looks too 'heavy' on the left side, in my not so honest opinion.
maybe it would look better if the black were on the other side, with her not looking into the credits, but off the poster.
Good advise all...Thanks for the input.
i hate imposing my art sense on other people's artwork, but if I may so humbly bother you - i feel like the poster is washed out without any black on it. maybe it's my monitor tho. (-_- ) - so take it with a grain of salt!looks good and it looks like the project has been allot of fun. i'll make sure to keep my eye open for the release.&Rew.
Seeing as how you are the master of contrast (you use black and white exceptionally well), I will take the advice with more than a grain.Thanks for dropping by.
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